Wednesday 13 March 2013

P-6




THE PURSUIT-6
(THE MIRAGE-II)



"Bolo!" ( tell me) Arnav demanded!

"Rajaa Saa hum samajh nahi rahein hain?"


( I don't understand your highness!)

"Nahin? Saroj ko kisliye bheja gaya?" he barked.


( Nope? why was Saroj sent to Khushi?)

"Kya?" ( what?) Malathi Jiji looked surprised.



21 comments:

Unknown said...

it is amazing
and hot
pls give now more of it fast

GoldenHaze said...

grrrr... yaar abhi tho likkhaa hain... kuch tho reham karo

Anonymous said...

Loved the update...
Khushi is adorable...

Parramjit said...

Awesome !!! Arnav how much he want khushi and khushi on other hand is having all untoward things about him in her mind.. Arnav can read khushi like a book.. loved the way arnav said khushi tum jaldi theek ho jao then you will see.. loved the update looking forward to more Romance...

stories.1408 said...

arnav is too naughty....hope u bring up his past soon before khushi.

Lakshmi said...

loved the update...Arnav knows where to hit...looking forward...

Unknown said...

awesome update...i really liked the passion b/w arnav n khushi

Disha said...

Hi Anu... Really enjoyed this update!!I noticed the subtle changes you made in Arnav's way of dialect and really appreciate it.
Last update like i had said i had felt something missing but with this its perfect.
Of course ASR will be ASR first but the slow awakening of emotions will happen gradually and love the way your picking on that now.
He makes her jealous and teases her and also feels happy about the fact that Khushi is uncomfortable even with the thought of him being with any one else .... Great Update !!

Unknown said...

you would never ever fail to amaze me anu with ur updates its so really romantic firtsly even i too thought like khushi god arnav is irresistible loved ur update...hey thanx for updating dis i thought u would b updating Inexplicable attraction

Unknown said...

hmmm... pursuit with patience... that would be a first for ASR...

harita said...

Arnav is teasing Khushi mercilessly now, bechari..she is in tears..of course he compensated with his kiss later :)
So Malathi jiji is not invloved and her sister is Bhairav's mistress, hmm
So Arnav is trying to find out what happened..nice update

shwetha hegde said...

wow tht was really cute.... waiting when khushi will accept arnav... and arnav man!!! just love him

Unknown said...

Awesome update.
Poor khushi, she s already in a confused state and arnav s teasing her a lot. Wonder wat saroj had told khushi. Thanks 4 pm.
nnsunn(IF)

Unknown said...

Wonderful and funny update.
Hahaha Khushi thought Arnav is gonna to kiss Buaji or the maid and all he wanted was breakfast.

tanmay said...

hey di..
reached home.. changed, gt tisya to change, n put her to sleep ..
next thg.. i hd my dear laptop in my hands, n was reading pursuit :)
n my hubby dear said.. it wont run away.. sleep fr a while :)

so tht is hw much i love it :)
nw abt the update... tooooooooo gd...

bt y cant arnav b sure even after all this.. tht he loves her..
actually he is sure.. he just doesnt wnat to accept it.. crazy husband to a crazy wife ;)

khushi can seriously embarrass herself in n number of ways :)

last time.. whn she wudnt stop speaking... n this time... whn she wudnt speak atall .. :)

though i really liked the fact... tht arnav didnt feel offended by a possible accusation, n tried to mk her trust him, rather than force her to trust him.

he really seems to b waiting fr her to get well..

on the whole.. it was too good..

n nw i can freely say...

waiting fr more :) :)

Unknown said...

aahh jelous khushi how cute n Arnav as teasing as ever ... really great going

Unknown said...

So cute.like arnav way teasing khushi. cheriebinny from IF

MEG said...

Saroj is mistress of Bhairav..... *hanging mouth*
Arnav playing and twising words with her while Khushi assuming all sorts..LOL.... especially when she began imagining it with buaji and gulabo. It was hilarious to see how she quivered while taking name of Gulabo.
Liked how she quicky opened her eyes as soon as realisation struck her tht Arnav doesn’t like it when she closes her eyes while talking to him.
And her relating the act of Arnav with Rana Bhadra Saalji Jethwa’s affair with maid....well tht totally did it up!
And the romance in the end....well tht definitely reeled Khushi off. Ahh....why can’t she just accept her love!
Nice update Di! :)

Vandana Ganguly said...

Am just loving it....he loves her and she loves him don't they get it?....

Vandana .sagar

Anonymous said...

Hey!

Interrogation. Hmmm ... Arnav is certainly intimidating Malathi.

Khushi is intelligent. She wants to know what Arnav is asking of her before saying yes or no to it ...

Trust Arnav to tease Khushi ... a lot ... Just imagine him going to Buaji for a kiss hahaha!



Maz786 said...

OH GOD!!! this gets better by the minute. can't get enough of this.