Wednesday, 14 May 2014

ARSHi FF-The Contrivance Teaser...


TEASER



NEW ARSHI FF

Coming soon on Goldenhazefiction…





The foot steps of a man echoed in the narrow lane, as Arnav Singh Ranbeera turned back, sweat pouring down his collar! He looked back slowly turning his head...... but there was none!
He walked a few feet more and there was an engine idling some where and more foot steps followed him making him realise,that he was being followed!

So THEY wanted him to know that he was being followed! Point noted! He took out a hanky from his trouser pocket and wiped the sweat off his forehead and neck and reached the fourth street light on the road specified and waited in dark as the street light as far as he knew never worked!

An unmarked taxi stopped just in front of him and the glass was pulled down just enough for the man inside to hand over a packet wrapped in cellophane to him, and whose face Arnav could not see as he was at a disadvantage with the light!
The taxi sped away and it started to drizzle as Arnav started his walk back to the place he started! As he walked in the drizzle , which was now fast brewing into a raging storm, he realised how far he had come from the time his parents died leaving him and his sister as orphans! He had single handedly erected a huge empire at the tender age of twenty one! It was then that he realized money made enemies too! And that money made him comit blunders!

Mistakes were costly and this blunder was costlier! He knew it the moment it was committed! So now was the time to pay back! Seven years later! He reached the pub! Went in and sat on a high chair, ordered for a beer and poured the content of the packet on the tabletop!
There was a SD card and more photos as proof and he asked for a lighter and burnt them right there, knowing fully well that they had more of it! He inserted the SD card into his tab and a presentation flashed on the screen with the site address he had to viist!
He logged on to the site and a small programmed presentation on third party sharing basis opened up, which said he had to do two things to get over the ugly situation! One was disclosed and the other was supposed to be disclosed after three months from the date of his knowing the first demand!

As he read the first demand, he knew at once that he was not in some small case of blackmailing and fraud but in the ...
the midst
of
a
contrivance!!!
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Let me know whats your take on this...

Enjoy and Express


GOLDENHAZE

27 comments:

jayanthy said...

Wow...new story and that too thriller. Cool and good luck. Looking forward to read.

Anu Reddy said...

Wow a new story, I am ready bring it on Anu!!! I cannot wait for the next update, prologue seems so intriguing!!!

What did Arnav do that he is being blackmailed?? Cannot wait :-)

Swetha Rajulapati said...

Awesome Anu.... Superb teaser... Waiting for it to start....

Disha said...

I m back to such a brilliant surprise !! First I thought he is a cop or gangster but I guess this is beyond that !

Sadaf salman said...

Superb start with new way to approch Your work tell your abilities as a writer its your verstility that make me your fan

Sri said...

Superb teaser ! Anu , waiting eagerly for the ud.

jyothi parsi said...

WOW ... WOW ...
ANU... That was one suspense filled PROLOGUE...not giving out much...making us think ALOT... Especially about the PLAYER who is MAKING THE GREAT ASR play on his TERMS... But then the MISTAKE must be TOO HUGE ...
Can't wait for FIRST PART...

Farhana Raheem said...

Seems interesting......looking forward for it!!

Shubhanjli Saxena said...

Wow that was fast.. thrilling and very different from others.
Bring it on Anuji.. Love ASR however he is... I am biased... ;-)
Thank you for giving us one more of your stories...

Nadia Almeida said...

Hey anu,

another Arshi.....gr8......sounds intriguing.......waiting for the next update.......

arnavini pareek said...

wow... congrats dii for this new start..

well totally excited....
hope this is again a new golden gemstone in the tiara of Golden haze

Paramjeet said...
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Paramjeet said...

interesting one !!! looking forward to read more.. best wishes and happy writing

thanks for pm + mail

subani jayasinghe said...

Whoa!! A new story !!,..What's happening?? That was trilling & exciting .. I cant wait for first chapter..
Continue asap!..

labiba sharif said...

wow...new story
cant wait ...thriller teaser

namendra shaz said...

A completely different genre from you! Great!

Sanghamitra Roy said...

Looks like its diffrent nd intresting.. Cntinue soon..

anuradha said...

sounds interesting. looking forward for the journey.

Lakshmi said...

Anu,seems like different genre. Bring it on:)

Aditi kaushal said...

Wow story .. this one looks like intense, suspense filled story.. What mistakes arnav made ?? why he is like this and where does khushi comes in his life..... lot of questions.....
This is going to be intense.....

cupcakzdps said...

wow another arhi fic
teaser s vry intriguing
is maan a part of dis fic too??? i wud luv 2 c maan here
luking fwd 2 read mre.....

Manju said...

Would love to read your work . The teaser is very interesting .My IF username is MDTharun , I have commented in IF too

Shalini_S said...

thriller?? waiting for it..

dream light said...

dam interesting
sounds thrilling

Anaya Annu said...

Mysterious!

sweetygirl28 said...

Wow this is interesting. I am all for it. Bring it on!!

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