Thursday, 4 April 2013

P-16

THE PURSUIT-16
(THE MIRAGE-II)

Pic credit: SS NAIR

Khushi had little time to rectify her mistake! She did not know what to do! She just did not want Arnav to feel guilty about causing pain to her! That too now! He had had enough! If he cannot even make love to his wife, then what else would there be for this man? She made up her mind and put both her hands round his neck and said," Sorry"
Arnav was furious... that she closed her eyes shutting him off! He hated it but... wait a minute! That was not Khushi! Ms.Pride chin had little use for words like please and sorry! And it was mostly 'muaff keejiye' not sorry!
He looked into her eyes! What was there? did he see pain?
Khushi saw him sizing her! This man was too observant and he read her well! Kuch kar Khushi aur jaldi her inner voice prodded her!
She moved a little and pursed her lips saying "hum tho yuheen..."
Something didn't ring right for Arnav!
He took her right hand in his opened it and asked," What is it Khushi?" Kissing her palm!

"Ji kuch bhi tho nahi!"( nothing at all) She replied
"Bolo"( Tell me) he persisted.
"Aap ko kya chahiye?"( What do you want?[me to tell]) she feigned exasperation.
"Sab kuch! dogi?" ( everything! Will you give?) He asked without batting an eye lid...
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9 comments:

aquariuslp said...

Kaun dha woh?? Is it Arnav? At least Khushi has realized her feelings for Arnav.. :) Now I want to see how this realization is gonna change her attitude towards him.. I love them both :D

Wonderful characters dii. :)

tanmay said...

the first thg tht i loved was her realisation tht she deserves to b a normal wife, n has a rt to share herown personal moments with her husband.....

though i still curse "the destiny" of dear khushi n arnav... even after her realisation n kind-of acceptance too, they can still nt hv their alone time..

i m very curious to know why did he leave... n i m pretty sure tht hand, which does nt belong to gulabo... actually belongs to arnav..
i mean tht wud b a very simple n cute reentry of her dear hubby.. :) i doubt if "their destiny" wud leave such a cute moment.. :)

feeling gr8 tht khushi finally realised tht arnav is not her liability, bt her love... coz arnav know she is more than his love.. n nw with khushis realisation.. they seem to b coming along well in their pursuit of each other..

once they accept each other completely.. in love, n life's battles.. thn it wud only b abt pursuing the probs in their life n winning against them once n for all :)

waiting fr next one di..

Disha said...

There you did it writer sa !!

Atleast Rani Sa has accepted her feelings and this is a huge gigantic step for her !

The realization has come but i dont know at what cost !!

That Gulabo babe i am scared is that shikar or someone from chandi's gang !

Tension is sky high yaar ..... chalo get my Arnavji back PUHLEEESE

Lakshmi said...

It took so much time for Khushi to realise her love ...Felt ery bad for khushi at her helplessness... Arnav scored points by being a considerate and caring husband...Hope the it's Arnav...why cliff hanger???

Kaushu said...

It has to be Arnav. Isn't it. Did I tell you that I hate cliffhangers?

subani jayasinghe said...

that was beautifuly written .. finaly Khushi has realized her feelings for Arnav.. :) thats nice.. looking forward to see how this realization is gonna change her attitude towards him..
Uff cliffhanger ending.. is it arnav? It has 2 b arnav :3
xoxo
dsbj

Paramjeet said...

who was it???? do update soon..

Amazing update !!! so finally Rani saa got to know that she loves her husband.. good.. der aaye durusat aaye.. hope arnav is fine and comes back soon..

Ranbir Singh Anand said...

Nice update.
So Khushi finally recognized, that she is in love with Arnav. How long will it take for Arnav from now on?

And who is there with Khushi. Please let it be Arnav.

jyothi parsi said...

Hey ANU...
Nice update...finally Khushi realised to herself that she is in love...but considering her stubbornness n THE JHETWA pride...it will be long to confess it to Arnav...as he doesn't believe in it...by the way where did Arnav do...Meyer be they found out who subottaged at SheeshMahal...
Poor Khushi...has so many things to feel bad...being unable to romance her husband ...but hope she will get better soon...their relation is progressing very well...nice pace...but it still has long LNG way to go...considering their complex life situations n complicated Charecters...
ARNAV IS SUCH A CONIDERATE HUSBAND...HOPE KHUSHI ILL REALIZE THAT ITS JUS THE WORD LOVE ARNAV DOESN'T HAVE IN HIS LIFE N NOT THE FEELING CALLED LOVE FOR HER HE DOESN'T HAVE...