Sunday 23 February 2014

P-60/5




THE PURSUIT-60/5
( Conclusion)






Khushi looked at Megha and said," Chaahey kutch bhi ho jaye aapko surakshit bhejdengay! Theek hain? Bus dheeraj rakhiye aur humaari bath suniye! Yeh log jo bhi kahain bus apni sanyam banaaye rakhein!"
( Whatever happens! I shall see to it that you are free! Ok? Just hold on! whatever these people say, just don't loose your cool)

Megha stared at the lady who was dishing out orders as if she was some military general and there was a huge army standing before her for her instructions And she was so bold and courageous! Genes! Megha thought!

"Megha ji! Humay poora bharosa hain hum log niklengay yahaan say" Khushi said and added, "Atleast you have faith in ASR? Right?"
Megha nodded and then started crying silently much to Khushi's exasperation.



THE PURSUIT



22 comments:

Unknown said...

Wooh quite thrilling. Waiting for a dhamakedar epilogue. I am having a nostalgia because Mirage is my First FF that i started reading followed by The Pursuit. And now it has come to an end. But every good thing comes to an end so its ok. Waiting for you to write many more. Thanks for this brilliant story.

Parramjit said...

well was looking out for the update of Pursuit from quite some time.. it was interesting and intriguing update.. will be looking forward to epilogue.. will miss this story of rani sha and her khadoos laad governor.. loved the update..

thanks for pm

Unknown said...

Awesome ending to an amazing story Anu!!! Loved it, felt like I was watching a movie climax :-)

Cannot wait for the epilogue, knowing you I am sure it is going to be amazing!!! As I know what happens after the epilogue I feel like I have first hand peek into the future lol!!!!

jahnavi thammareddy said...

Amazing update. Though I am happy Arnav Khushi and everyone else r safe. But sad that it's going to end. I will certainly miss it. I am going to read it again from mirage.

Thank u for giving us such a wonderful ff.

Siri said...

Lovely update came to a beautiful ending.throughly enjoyed the journey

namendra shaz said...

At last the update. Though a bit of an anticlimax, as I've got so used to DYM now. But the Arshi equation is always nostalgic. Have loved this story set in Rajasthani culture from its inception.
You have always been thorough in creating an authentic context to every story of yours...another aspect I've enjoyed!

Unknown said...

Will rply after reading

cupcakzdps said...

brilliant ending
loved it

Farhana Raheem said...

It was awesome............the end was full of thrillers loved it!
waiting for the epilogue!

Unknown said...

Awesome ud
But feeling sad bcoz its going to end
Will realy miss this story

Unknown said...

wow anu.....very thrilling.....so khushi and arnav managed to get out.......was thinking you would end it with Aarnav dying......glad you didn't........

Swetha rajulapati said...

Hey Anu, atlast u ended this ff.. Superb update and ending... Loved it...

Sanghamitra Roy said...

Amazing lovd it..

Mithila said...

Simply Awesome
Loved it :)

jayanthy said...

Finally it ended on happy note
and action packed. Waiting for epilogue. This is your first writing I have red and later became fan of DYM :). Keep writing and we will be keep reading and good luck.

Disha said...

Der aye lekin durust aaye !!

Fab update yaar .... poora adrenalin rush se bharpoor !

Khushi was her ever majestic self ..always thinking for best and waiting for her husband to come rescue her.

Teddy and Arnav's easy camaraderie was really wonderful but it made me feel immensely happy to see Arnav take a stand and be the one to take it upon himself ... like he said he needed to do it to prove his worth to his own self.

Finally Arnav and Khushi are safe and together !

Thanks Anu :)

Lakshmi said...

Anu thank you so much for this FF. Arnav & Khushi always together...forever in our memories too.

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arnaushi said...

Hello!!!
lately i have been a reader of yours but i could not comment because of my tight schedules and exams...thank you for tolerating a silent reader like me...i started reading both your FF's probably a week back...Both the FF are as such that i couldn't stop myself from reading even at nights...it was such attention seeking....
i thank my stars for making me come across such wonderful story! i have always liked reading mysterious arshi story. But as i am a strict arshi lover and a die hard fan of them,...i can't read them separately and hence i am sorry for not reading "destiny you n me" and "vashali". i don't get sleep if arshi are separately in any of my stories that i read!!! so sorry!!!

THE MIRAGE:
it an awesome way to introduce such an epic story. you description about everything was just perfect!!! The way you revealed each and every twist and turn ad past was just amazing. The bond between khushi and maan was so pure yet so powerful that i was in awe of of it. The way arnav misunderstood khushi for ruining her sister's marriage and gambling with her happiness was so wrong but he being a good brother tried helping his sister but he himself was wrong in understanding khushi and her relationship with both shyam and maan. i loved the frustrated arnav when he realized his mistake yet he was kept way from khushi's problems. Maan's protectiveness towards khushi was fab. The mystery was well revealed and came in packet with huge blows..the arshi relationship was a treat to read...their cute nok-jhunk were so sweet ones. and khushi is such a doll!! she wants everyone safe keeping herself in danger. there was a moment when i wanted to kick that chandi's but i couldn't.....

arnaushi said...

THE PURSUIT:
this was my fav coz of the arshi sweet romance and the increasing bonding between khushi-arnav, maan-arnav and of course arnav-khushi. The love between them was clearly shown but arnav chose not to name it....but he too did it.....the family and arshi were trying to tie maan in a relationship but the past truth was shattering as he loved khushi so much but couldn't claim her!!! but megha was a cute girl and perfect distraction for maan and he needs to move on...from khushi. thank god that shikar died a natural death so that the chandi won't again try to revenge them...khushi's inner turmoil was nicely written taking care of her past and relationships with everyone. buaji was so sweet!!!!! she is really very understanding and helping

khushi: she is a gem of a person who can't let her dear ones suffer because of her. her love for arnav was so sweet and her pride was the best thing in this whole FF..."that chin" and "the jethwa pride" was so cute ones...her friendship with maan was pure from her side though maan fell in love with her...she considers him as an integral part of him(that was awesome) she such good daughter of her family and her relativity with reva was nice

arnav: he is a actually a good hearted but possessive person...about both his sister and his khushi...they both re his life his plans were mind blowing even if it held so many risks..he love for khushi was immense but he chose not to speak it and he couldn't let khushi go to deepu even when he came to know the truth!!!

maan: he is really a good and lovely person...his love for khushi is so pure that he let her go and didn't want to destroy her life and trust by speaking the truth. he loves khushi so much that it hurts us to see him like that...plz let him make move on in his life...he definitely needs that.

lav: she is such a b****. she is trying to get arnav for money and fame by hurting and hurling curse at khushi...she definitely deserved both the slaps from the ASR...

megha: she is cute girl, hope she gets her love in maan!!!

shikhar: that rowdy fellow brought his own death by his own hands...good for that...but i wish he could get beaten up a bit!!!

raizada's: they are so understanding and loving people....they hepled khushi and her family a lot...

jetwas: they are such good chaps abut are in trouble due to some or the other thing.....

lovelybarun said...

hai........ iam new reader.. this is my first story of blog reading .. its nice and thank you for writing such a wonderful story on arshi..

i cant find epilogue... can you olz help with it