The Whisper Valley-4/2
"What
happened???"... Joel was besides her in a moment!
Khushi was trembling in
shock and she just caught hold of the kitchen counter and looked at Joel with
such a frightened expression, that he stepped forward putting an arm round her
saying,
"Whats wrong
ma'am?”
She moved away and
looked at the kitchen door and asked him incredulously," Did you come
through that door way Joel?"
"Yeah!
Ofcourse!" He said!
"I was in the
hall and heard you scream so ...well just ran to the kitchen!"
"What ever
happened Missie!" Rose rushed in...
"Aunty...er...."
Khushi was sweating profusely and Rose looked at Joel saying,"Joel will
you take her to the parlour?" I shall get the tea!"
The Whisper Valley
"Now dear! Tell
me!" Rose said as Joel went into the office room to do some work, after
pestering her in vain...to tell him what she saw...
"....er..."Khushi
just looked at Aunty Rose!
Her saviour had warned her not to tell anything to
anyone!
Many questions crept in her mind!
Was he genuine? Why should he be so very interested in
her well-being! May be she should be telling all this to the police and Nani ji
so that she got helped by them! Was he actually the attacker and then was doing
all this?
Oh! God! Her head spun! But he was not the attacker!
She could distinctly note two men! One who tried to strangulate her and one who
saved her! He did save her! It was a fact established beyond reason! She
touched her throat, which she covered with her scarf and there was still that
mark made by the rope there!
"Please tell
me" Rose Mary Sanders egged her on...
He asked her not to reveal anything to anyone!
He asked her not to reveal anything to anyone!
Did that include aunty Rose?
But she was a darling! This one time she would share!
She sipped her tea
and shivered!
"Out
with it child! "Rose now was impatient!
"I saw..er...
a... ..ehem...something weird... "She looked away and saw the fog in
torrents through the window and gulped!
Rose put her warm
hand on hers and asked," Trust me... I know! Thats why I am asking! Tell
me! Jesus will give you peace my child! I shall pray for you!"
Khushi gulped again
and said," You do? But you won't believe me Aunty!"
"Try me!"
She said raising her eyebrows in a typical gesture!
Khushi squirmed in
her sofa and said," I saw two things!"
"Ok...?"
Rose egged her on!
The first was a head
that was hung from the door way and it was bleeding!
"WHHHHAAATTTTTT??????"
Rose got up from the chair she was occupying!
"Whose head was
it?" Rose questioned her!
"I don't know
Aunty! It was a knight's head all right! ! You understand? Complete with the
headgear and the gauzed veil like... she paused and looked at the horrified
face of aunty Rose!
Khushi asked her for
affirmation " You know... that...with the knights head gear and
all?"
Rose
nodded her head in all directions which told Khushi she did not understand at
all!
Nevertheless she
continued saying,"...the sword through his throat!" She shivered!
Rose hugged her,
"Oh my poor poor child!... and...???" She prompted...
"The other was a
lady!" Khushi calmed down! Very beautiful in her... "She suddenly
remembered the bizarre vision that she had when she became conscious..."..in
a white wedding gown! She had a veil across her face and she threw a bouquet at
me! So I screamed"
"Where is the
bouquet!"Rose asked!
"In the
kitchen...er... I dunno!" Khushi caught the back of her head with her
right hand unable to comprehend anything out of the incident!
Khushi closed her
eyes!
She filled the kettle
and turned back and she felt a shadow hover around!
She turned and
screamed as she saw a knight’s face covered in black gauze and a sword through
his throat that was bleeding! She was scared coz she could only see his head
and there was no body attached to it! It was hung from the kitchen door way and
she closed her eyes and opened them to find a beautiful lady in a white gown
and veil she smiled and threw a bouquet at her and Before she did anything Joel
was besides her!
“Did you catch the
bouquet?” Rose was asking her!
I don’t know! She didn't remember! In reflex action she extended her hand she remembered but nothing after that!
I don’t know! She didn't remember! In reflex action she extended her hand she remembered but nothing after that!
"Lets see!"
Rose went in to the
kitchen and Khushi followed her and heard Rose scream this time!
There was a bouquet
in the kitchen but it was what that she bought at the Long Road and it was
completely vandalized! Every single petal had been crushed and the stalks
mashed! Khushi's eyes welled up! Such beautiful flowers! How could anyone do
that! She just stared at it dumbly as Rose rang the bell to call a maid to
clean up and called the security on the intercom asking them if they saw any
outsider coming in! There was none!
'But this is what I
got from the market aunty! But I left it at the place where... "Khushi
rectified in the last moment and said....".... where I got lost!"
"How did it come
here? WHO WOULD HAVE BROUGHT IT?
Who could it be!
Khushi went on… as if dazed and then as if remembering something, said,
"But this was not the bouquet she threw at me!"
She grew agitated and
Rose caught her hand and dragged her out and saying,"... you need rest!
Please! Just rest and we will talk after I serve dinner! I am staying back
today and we shall talk about this!"
The Whisper Valley
Dinner was stilted
affair as Devyani was not to be told all this and Khushi and Rose decided upon
this after a meet with Joel and so they had a quiet dinner in Nani ji's room!
There was some, lentil soup, rotis with mixed vegetable curry and salad and a
pineapple cake that Rose baked celebrating Khushi's arrival!
After dinner, the
ladies settled with a cup of coffee... and Khushi who was a little relaxed
thought, if she could read a little and then it struck her!
MY BOOK! The Legend
of the Whispering Valley!!!!!She stood up in a huff!
“Ka hua bitiya?” Nani
asked looking at an agitated Khushi!
( what happened my
child?)
“Er...” She looked
helplessly at Rose who immediately said...
“…yeah... please go
and get the hot compression stuff... I forgot all about it! Shirley must be
ready with it and… as an after thought said," You take it in the dining
room! No need to go into the kitchen”… and winked at her!
Khushi ran out
thankful for Rose's intervention...
She first took the
stuff handed it over and then walked to her room!
Oh no! She lost the book! It was a treasure and now Aron
would be cross with her! More so it belonged to the library! It would be so
embarrassing! Of course she would offer to pay... that was not the issue! ...
or replace it or whatever! But... she so
much wanted to read the story!
She opened the door of her room and walked in switching on the lights!
Suddenly she remembered something!
She opened the door of her room and walked in switching on the lights!
Suddenly she remembered something!
How did the man get her into her room! There must be a
secret passage! Why not! It was an ancient building and there must be some such
secret passages!
She started
searching! She first rushed into the bathroom and checked the door and searched
the over-head exhaust and everything else! But every opening was secure! No
tampering! No traces of anything being opened.
She then walked to
the window and checked its ledge, the curtain rod and the hinges and the frame!
They were not only secure but she also noticed that...they were protected by a
very thin mesh which she failed to notice before! Then how could he get her in!
She then checked the
walls tapping on them! Nothing! No trace of any hidden door! She went on to the
turret and she groaned! There was no way anyone could get in through that, as
it was packed!
She came back and sat
down on her bed!
Oh! No!!!!
There was a knock on
the door and Rose stepped in.....
“How are you feeling
my dear?” She asked her!
“I am better thank you”...Khushi pulled a chair for her to sit down and sat on the bed!
“You said you saw… forgive me for asking and scaring you but…” Rose shook her head...
“I am better thank you”...Khushi pulled a chair for her to sit down and sat on the bed!
“You said you saw… forgive me for asking and scaring you but…” Rose shook her head...
“No! ... No aunty Rose! I myself am going through the
entire incident! Its so...so...” Khushi paused…
"eerie
!" Both of them said at once!
“The knight- bleeding
and beheaded!” Khushi repeated.
“Well Martha my
sister is into this gypsy thing- crystal balls and face reading all that you
know? …and all that... beads and stuff!!!!But...er....I don't believe in it! I
am a true servant of the Lord!” Rose crossed her heart but said with very
bright eyes,
"… she always
says beheading... that meant loss of honour! And that implies... you...are...going
to be… no! She squirmed in her chair.
Khushi stared at
Rose! Did that mean she was going to be...murdered and face death or loose her
honour! No! She shook her head!!!
“Just leave it! Just
forget it as an old woman's blabber my dear” She tried to play it down!
“Ok! Just forget it!”
She said again.
“But I can't! Khushi wailed!
I can't aunty! It was such a gory incident and I just can't... can't !!” She
was at loss of words!
What was happening! Twenty four hours back she was at
peace with her mother in her own two bedroomed apartment! Everything just
changed in twenty four hours!!!!
“You saw the Knight
but you also saw a lady in a wedding gown and you said that she threw a bouquet
at you...”Aunty Rose tried to divert the conversation!
“Yes aunty” Khushi
said...
“I was wondering if
you knew the significance of it...?” Rose asked her!
“Significance?”
Khushi frowned!
“In a wedding, if you
happen to catch the bride's bouquet then you are supposed to be the next bride
to be! Its an omen my child!” Rose said!
“Oh?” Khushi said and
then asked her... “…but you said the beheaded knight is loss of honour! Then
this?”
And did I see them? As in really or was it my
imagination she thought!
“How could it be
Aunty? Is this house haunted?"
So many questions she
had in her mind!
“I dunno!” Rose
averted her eyes!
“Are you hiding
something from me Aunty Rose?” Khushi asked!
“Nothing my dear!
Just that I personally never saw any thing eerie here but people and the rest
of the staff do say... that ...er... the ghosts of Willow and the Knight
Raieszaada haunt the place so does the ghosts of Phelomena and the Lord of
Eaton!
"Who are
they?" Khushi asked!!!
"Oh! Its all in
the legend... of the valley! I shall tell you… the whole night is there for
that!" Rose brushed it aside and said," Can I ask you
something?"
" There is something that does not match!" Rose said scrunching her nose!
" There is something that does not match!" Rose said scrunching her nose!
" Wh...what?"
Khushi asked...
“You said you were
lost and then... how did you come back?As in find the way???? back here to Casa
Willows!" Her question echoed in the silent room!
15 comments:
Yeaa first.. ll comment after reading..
Ahaa Subhanjli ji!!!! Yay!!!
Ohh my God. How ll i sleep now.. I too ll scream.. Bad idea to read first.. ;-)
But seriously amazing write up..
Everything is so real. How do you do this Anu ji.. Its getting more and more thrilling.. and yes once again.. goose bumps..
Anu you really are good at this genre. You have us all guessing. Scared...not yet!
God!! That was scary .. I hope khushi will get that library book back too just like the other stuffs.. I hope Arnav is not a ghost .. Wonder what will happen next .already waiting ..
lovely.. happy that you are updating is regularly.. would like to know the story entirely.. felt bad for khushi as she lost her book and her flowers so mangled.. loved the update..
thanks for mail :)
OMG beheaded kinght ,crushed flower bouquet.really scary.i do have a doubt that house was haunted.realy intriguing story yaar.already waiting for the next update to unfold the mystery of the story.
Is arnav really a ghost??
Omg..!!
The house was haunted..
Scary..
with ur thriller updts no 1 wud sleep!!!!
awsum updt...
u know what u should wrote more in this genre
Finally, read it. Anu need to say, it's shaping well. Fantastic. The thrill and suspense is intact. I so wish to be there with them to know the legand. Hope khushi gets that book back. Even I want to know the past. Looking forward....
Thrilling and brilliant work of writing.. Awesome :)
today i m damn tired but my sleep is long gone with your update....amazingly written...the plot is getting even thicker with passing days....loved how khushi is getting to see different things!!
what khushi saw was really scary n the other one was sweet!!!
waiting to know more
superb.. it is very interesting and scary too :)
OMG I am scared .... I dont Know that now i can get a sound sleep .....update is amazing and scary too... there are many questions running in my head is arnav is ghost may be bcoz the surname suggests so.......is willow feathers was khushi in past or not....arghh i m not getting any answers of these ques. i will wait for that update when i will get answers of my ques
Very intriguing the suspense is gripping. Yay term excited to read further
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