The
Whisper Valley-5/2
Khushi was out of her
mind with fear! Her body went numb as the attacker dragged her into the
thicket! And When he pushed her against a giant oak tree,his hand holding her
by her waist and neck, he caught her by her nape and asked her gruffly,"
Didn't I tell you to leave?"
Khushi who was close
to a collapse due to fear... at once felt relieved as it was the voice of her
saviour-Mr.Foggy Two eyes!
"Didn't I?" His voice
rasped in the dark night!
She struggled to
breathe and then tried to talk..."Ummm...ummm.."...but could not find her voice as
her throat was parched!
"How many times have I
to tell you?"He rasped again!
But...she croaked and
heard him swear and adjust her against him so that she could breathe better!She
could feel the leather of his gloves making marks on the tender skin of her
neck and throat!
"But why should I go?
Wha.....what have I....er....done?"She finally asked the question that was
plaguing her!
"What you have
done??????#$@%!" He swore and turned her and pinned her to the tree trunk
and thats when she saw him! His face was covered in a thick muffler but well
there were those eyes that peered out at her intense and piercing making her to
gasp in a strange mix of fear and awe!
"What you have
done?" The eyes narrowed and even in the dark she could see them red and
blazing!
"You spoilt so
many things!" He shook his head and pinned her further to the tree trunk
saying,
"Move it now!
Leave this place! Now! Just get out of Whisper Valley!"
Khushi took
courage! Three encounters and she already knew he meant no harm!
"Why? I
won't!" She said and flinched as he move din front saying," Then be
ready to die a gory death!"
"B...b....b.bbbb..uuuuttt....
why?" She asked inspite of herself!
He groaned and said
"Listen...Just leave... and.... forget about all this!"
"No..."
Khsuhi blurted out before she could even think as it came naturally from
inside! Why should she? whats all this and who are all these people to oust her
out of some place as if they owned it! All the miseries she suffered took a
toll on her and she was now reckless!
What? Are
you?????....crazy?????You...don't even know...." He was now shaking in
anger!
Khushi felt he wanted
to say something more but was not sure and so she gained some more confidence
and asked "Who are you?....Whats all this?"
There was a deafening
silence and then she heard it! The distinct sound of horse hoofs hitting the
ground and the trot of the horse! And she yelped as a black something ran past
her in lightening speed!
He caught her neck
with his hand and said menancingly," You ask too many questions! Just
leave the Whisper Valley!"
" ...And If I
don't?" She asked recklessly....
Again there was
silence as the eyes studied her looking into her eyes deep and probing...
And then he said very
coldly..." You will... "
"I won't!"
she said squaring her sagging shoulders!
What are you doing
khushi! She heard her innerself chiding her! In the midst of the night
challenging a masked intruder mostly on his own home ground!
His hand tightened on
her neck and she winced as already there was the mark from the earlier attack!
He swore and pulled
her collar off as a button popped off her top as his thumb ran across her
neck...
She could hear him
sucking in his breath!
That ^%$##@&! He
swore!
"Why did you
save me?"She asked him!
He suddenly jerked
back as if he was electrocuted and said gruffly," Enough!Just leave the
place and this is the last time you are being warned! I won't come to your
rescue the next time!"
He turned when
Khushi's mind raced faster!
She needed to know!
She said," I
will..."
He stopped mid stride
and turned back and did she see disappointment in his eyes????
"Good...
"and then said a tad sadly she thought..."...good bye!"... he
sighed... and made to move
"But only if you
meet me tomorrow and tell me whats all this about!" She said calmly!
He turned and pushed
her hissing," NO!"
"Yes!"
Khsuhi realised she had a strange power in her to make him listen!But was
she able to score on him? She wondered!
"NO!!!! NEVER!
This is the last time you are seeing me!"He said...
Khushi somehow felt
bereft!
Last time? Something
tugged at her heart!
"No! I want to
meet you once before I leave and I swear I will leave Whisper Valley after
that..." She bargained with him!
"No!" He
blew out a low whistle and she heard the hoofs and there was a moment to her
right!
"Listen..."She
was still talking when there was the noise of someone talking....
".....er.....where
is she? Oh lord Jesus! Joel please....oh please poor child...she must be....
oh..."
It was aunt Rose's
voice...
Khushi turned and the
man then moved like lightening and thats when she realised there was a horse
waiting! He lunged on to it and Khushi panicked...
She must know...
"I will wait for
you... at the Whisper Rock... tomorrow!" She said boldly!
"No!" He
hissed... "I am not coming!"
"Why?" She
demanded!
This is ridiculous!
She thought at the
same time!
She was demanding
something from a stranger!
"Shut up and
go... they are looking for you." He hissed!
"No!"She
stamped on the ground!
He growled,"
Lady don't test my patience!"
Khushi realised how
accented his voice was just like old times!
He also looked odd!
There was an aura of some etherial quality in him! He somehow looked different
!It felt different with him! Like never before!
"Atleast... tell
me when I can meet you!" She pleaded with him.
"Never!" He
dug his heels into the sides of his horse..and started to move...
"Listen I will
leave as you said but if you meet me at the whisper rock... tomorrow at
twelve!" She said quickly!
"NO!!! AND GOOD
BYE"He did a mock salute....turning away...
"Tomorrow...
at..."Khsuhi could not complete as he left!
There was only
darkness and silence enveloping her!
Where did he go? Why
did she not here the hoof sounds then! What was the man! Was he for real?
She turned and
screamed but her scream never was heard as a hand stopped it by pressing hard
on her mouth!
It was the same man!
"Not a word to
them!!!!And....Tomorrow...YOU ARE LEAVING THE WHISPER VALLEY! and
now...er...finally...GOOD BYE!"
"Ms.
Tripathi!"
"Hello my
dear!" Joel and Rose's voice echoed in the silence and Khushi panicked
turning to acknowledge them!
Holy cross!!! He was
there! Why couldn't they see him! She turned and he was nowhere in sight! What
was happening!
She shivered !
"Aunty" She
said breathlessly!
"Oh my poor
darling!" Rose was by her side in minute and enveloped her saying,"
What happened?"
"How come you
are here?" Joel asked her looking around suspiciously!
"Er..."
Khushi took a long deep breath and said," ...er.... I heard someone
knocking at the door?"
"Knocking?
Who?None comes in at this time and I would know as I have the security
informing me if anyone comes in to the gate!" Joel was furious!
"I dunno Joel! I
heard the door open" She observed him then!
Why was he furious?
"...and... she
continued... so I went down and then found er... the door open and walked out
only to be locked out!" She concluded with a heart that hammered in her
rib cage!
Why was she lying?
Coz the man asked her to! Came the answer from with in but...he was.... why
should he?
Her head spun! Hey
Devi Mayya!
"Then
how are you here? Why diddn't you call us Ma'am? "Joel asked a tad angrily!
"I ...er...was not carrying my mobile Joel and .... er....I was walking to the out house to sound one of our maids!"Khsuhi explained.
"But the out house is that side dear!This is opposite of that..."Rose said...
Khushi
opened her mouth to say I Know.... but curbed herself and said," Oh is
that so?"... instead and Rose looked at Joel who was meaning to ask more and
said," Oh give her a break! Can't you see she is lost? Just let me take
her in...we...shall discuss tomorrow morning Joel! Just take rest and sorry for
the bother"... and shepherded her in!
"Oh!
Are you alright?" Joel asked and then he suddenly smiled saying," I am
sorry coz its my responsibility to look into the safety of the inmates of the
Casa Willows!I just was so worried when Mrs.Sanders called me in the dead of
the night and reported you missing!"
Khsuhi
looked at Rose! They reached the main entrance and were on the stairs!The light
on the porch was switched on... obviously for the search party to trace her and
she saw that Rose was a little flustered!
"How
did you find out aunty? Did you come to my room?"Khsuhi asked!
"
Er...I went to check on Madam! You know just to replace water in her hot water
bag and while walking back I accidentally happened to touch the door of your
room and it gaped open! I heard you lock it when I retired so I went in and
checked and found that the bed was empty and so..." she looked at her
stricken..."I was so scared!"
Tears welled up in her eyes!
Tears welled up in her eyes!
"Ok
I take leave!" Joel left them to their meanderings after opening and settling
them in...and closing the main door after him which automatically locked it!
"Aunty!
Please!Awe!" Khushi hugged her and Rose sniffed and said frowning,"... now
where did you get that perfume from Missie?"
"Perfume?
I didn't apply any" She said frowning!
"But you smell like...oh god! You smell
like the..."Rose's eyes rounded as she almost whispered hoarsely...
You
smell like the Valley of willow!
"What?"
"Yeah!
Rose took one step forward and sniffed and said ominiusly! "It is that! It is
the Valley Of Willow!"
"Whats
that?" Now whats this new willow twist! Khushi snorted!
"Don't
you know its the rare perfume that was created for Willow feathers and was
gifted to her! Oh god! Where ever did you get that from...! I thought they never got round
to finding its formula!"Rose exclaimed...
What
are you talking aunty? I can't get it!"...Khushi was... zapped!
She
was then reminded of the faint perfume she could sense in the library but right
in the gardens....???...No she didn't!
"Ok!
Missie lets put you to bed and... Rose walked her already to her room and
Khushi went in switched on the light and found no surprises there for a change!
She
sat on the bed and said..."...ehem... why dont you tell me the legend of the Whispering Valley!"
"I
..e.r..."She closed her eyes and said... "happen to loose it....er... yesterday
in the woods!"
"What? Wait till Aron gets a whiff of it" Rose said animatedly! He will make such a
ruckus of it!"
"Awe! Aunty you don't know how sorry I am but... but...well..what can I say but apologise Khushi lamented!
"No no my dear! We will talk to him but... its sort of too difficult to narrate the story! I would love to but! But we ...don't have that kind of time!"She turned and said," Tell you what! There must be one transcribed copy at the old club house which is being used as the Town Hall presently!You may... get to read it there! But you won't be able to borrow it!" She said!
"Thats fine I shall go and read it there! Anything to know about this legend!" Somehow she felt many answers she was searching for...were hidden in the legend!
"Ok! I wil ask one of our Drivers Mahesh to take you there! Go read and he will get you back! Madam has strictly instructed that you will not go anywhere without an escort!" Rose said much to Khsuhi's relief!
"Ok
aunty!" She said smiling!
"Sleep
tight my dear and wake me up if you find anything amiss Rose walked out
closing the door behind her and Khushi locked it and ran to the sliding door
and opened it to just catch the glimpse of a rider on the horse vanish into the
fog!
He
was there in the gardens! Oh God!
She
tossed and turned in bed till finally sleep took over!
THE
WHISPER VALLEY
Khushi
got down the car to look at the huge door way! It was built strangely in roman
architecture! The central huge door of admittance had pillars on both sides
supporting a v shaped frame as in roman architecture with Gothic tastes to it!
Huge
half circlular steps led to the main entrance and she walked up the stairs
staring at the huge structutre in awe as it gleamed prestine white in the
morning sun!
A
ravine called out somewhere and Khsuhi broke into goose bumps as she felt being
watched!
She
stopped at the top stair and looked around! She found none! Even Mahesh took
the car out to park it in the empty space besides the club house!
She
walked in and smiled at the door jangler announcing her presence like old
times! she looked around... A huge hall... may be an erstwhile ball room spread
before her which now had rows of tables with two chairs each neately arranged
before each window which was draped in curtains still in the vintage style...
giving a very ornate look to the hall! The central chandelier was very heavy
and ornate in white and gold with dangling candle holders swaying slightly to
the almost still air in the huge room!
there
was a small desk to one corner which said May I hep you!
Khushi
smiled at the yound lady sitting there and said," Good morning! I am
Khushi! Khushi Tripathi! I am ..."
The
young lady was dark but very pretty with typical local features of large
expressive eyes and a generous mouth!
She
immediately got up and welcomed her saying," Good morning Ma'am! Myself
Thangam!" Typically and added..."What can I do for you?"
Khushi liked her instantly and understood she was a Tamilian!
She
smiled and said," I wanted to read the Legend of the Valley and where can
I find it?"
Thangam looked at her oddly and said,"Second floor Ma'am!There is an archive section there where the copy of the original trancripts of Anne MacPhereson is kept for visitors to go through! As you know they say... "...she stopped abruptly... "oh,no I am sorry! I shouldn't be telling tourists all this!"
"What
were you trying to say?" Khushi asked!
"No
no Ma'am! If our supervisor gets to know he will remove me from my job the
young lady was scared in the earnest!
"No
no! I won't tell what is it about the legend please tell me!"
Thangam
looked to the left and to the right and leaned forward asking Khushi to lean
towards her too and whispered," ...it is said that the legend was not narrated by Anne MacPherson by Willow's grand daughter!They
say the legend was written by the ghost of Willow feathers as she spoke to her
grand daughter who was a medium of sorts...
Anne
then jumped into the creek after she finished the work as the legend is cursed!
Those who read it fully will never live to narrate it! Those who narrate it
will never live to read it if they have heard from others!"
"What???
Strange!" khsuhi exclaimed frowning!
"And
Ma'am..." Thangam again looked left and right and whispered! The legend
transcripts are guarded by none other than the great Arnav Simha's ghost himself
they say! And who ever tried to possess them dies splitting blood!
They
say he still is visible on his horse with his dog Buddy in the creek and when
the fog is thick and the light low... the valley often sees someone pass by
searing through the thick fog...like in the times of the Valley Fair which is
going to be soon!" She said animatedly!
"When
is it? What is it?" Khushi asked!
"Its
an annual Valley Fair! It was conducted in the past for making the neighbouring
villages to showcase their produce to the affluent here at the Valley!
But
now its both a tradition and a tourist attraction just like the carnival in Goa"Thangam exclaimed proudly!
"OH!" Khushi Said ingraining what she said!
The
best part is the Whisper Annual Ball which is still conducted after three
centuries as the government recently recognised it as one of the events
showcasing our culture!It will be on the night of the third day- the final day of
the fair! "Thangam went on!
"Wait a minute you mean to say there is a fair of three days and the third day there is a ball in the evening? But who participates?" Khushi laughed out!
That would have been then for the European population... these days who would... She was sceptical!
"No ma'am! There are about 40 traditional families listed here at the valley and they by first right are the prime invitees apart from the local rulers the clan of the Arnav Simha Raeszaada!
The
rest of the hundred tickets are sold to the tourists!
There
would be a grand dinner with the ball! she said smiling!"
"Oh!" Khushi said....
" Anyways...up the stairs and towards the right on the second floor! Ask the incharge Rishi he will help you out!"Thangam got busy with yet another tourist!
Khsuhi took to the wide ornate stairs that deviated to both the sides after a central landing!
Shetook to right and collided into a hard lithe body and looked up to see a very handsome man say," Whoa! Are you for real?"
Khushi frowned at him as he went on one knee saying,
"Alberto Rossini at your service...Madame Feathers!
"Oh!" Khushi said....
" Anyways...up the stairs and towards the right on the second floor! Ask the incharge Rishi he will help you out!"Thangam got busy with yet another tourist!
Khsuhi took to the wide ornate stairs that deviated to both the sides after a central landing!
Shetook to right and collided into a hard lithe body and looked up to see a very handsome man say," Whoa! Are you for real?"
Khushi frowned at him as he went on one knee saying,
"Alberto Rossini at your service...Madame Feathers!
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19 comments:
yeaa after a long wait....and i am first again :-)
Hey How are you....Good to see you!!!
Hey why did he addressed Khushi as Madame feathers. Is she an incarnation of Willow feathers. OMG this is getting too thrilling. Loved the ghostly encounter. I guess the second round of legend reading ll begin. Super excited. And yes not to forget the goose bumps, they were their definitely.
I am fine Anu ji. How have you been.
Awesome update and waiting to read it next on website.
Quite scary update dear.getting too mysterious.eagerly waiting for the next update how the story unfolds.
Brilliant..what can I say more.. Is Arnav really ghost?? Madame feathers?? Is she related to madame feathers some how?? wonder what will happen next.
loved it
its getting interesting
someone is trying to kill her
n someone is protecting her
poor soul is so confused with all the warnings
i think the fair is were crucial n will khushi get her some answers
That last sentence left me puzzled. The mystery is deepening, Joel looks a suspicious character, now this Alberto!
why did that man addressed khushi as madame feathers??? so it was arnav who wants khushi to leave the valley.. is he the ghost or a descendant of ruler of valley.. khushi is so stubborn she won't take the words of arnav seriously and is not leaving the valley.. lets see what he will do next.. intriguing update.. loved it.. :)
It seems Joel is involved in whatever is happening in WV.
And now who is this Alberto guy?
The mystery grows, and grows!
Anu you are hooking us even more with each update. Lot of questions pop up...this or that..But as usual wait for you to unfold. But can you post often if possible. It's very interesting. Here I'm not scared of Khushi's safety unlike Vaishali. But the mystery is killing us. Aunty Rose , even Nani has more story to tell...I'm waiting for anyone of them to give some clues. Looking forward.
the mystery continues ... and now a new twist ...why was she referred as madam features ??
loved it..
yay i knew khushi looked like feathers.....but this part just gave goosebumps all the while...like really!!!! i was so engrossed in it!!!
loved how MR foggy two eyes and khushi conversed and how khushi was able to strike a convo and made him listen to her!!! loved how thangman revealed a lot about the legend..it was really very scaring and just awesome..so khushi is gonna be reading the legend!!!
waiting for more!!!!
now the story starts getting out of wraps n its getting quite interesting too ...........i know Khushi is willow feathers but i dont want Arnav to be a ghost..........please dont make Arnav a ghost ........update next part early
Finally I entered whisper valley..woah what a ride so far..thoroughly enjoyed . Let the mystery start to unfold
Awesome update Anu!!! Loved it.
Okay more confusion is Arnav alive or is he a ghost or this guy is his grandson or someone related to him???
Cannot wait fir the secrets to unfold!!! Woohoo so the website is ready? Update soon!!!!!!
awesome update... such a mysterious story...
getting interesting.. want to know the past soon!!
Long wait for the update but what an update ... amazing totally.... thrilling and interesting... want to know the legend soon... looks like khushi is a lookalike of willow feathers.... is that so ????
wowww...
such an interesting n amazing update dear...
very well written...
IF smartgirl9009
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