Thursday, 21 March 2013

P-10


THE PURSUIT-10
(THE MIRAGE-II)


Pic Credit: SS NAIR

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Arnav took the winding route to Bhagini hills... as Reva was flowing along with them towards their left...

The ghat section was very picturesque although arid! The dust clouded along as their vehicles zoomed on the sandy tracks and Khushi noticed that they were not on their way back to SheeshMahal!

She looked at Arnav and back at the track!
"What?" Arnav asked her sensing that she realised the deviation in their route!
In reply she just nodded meaning nothing!

"Won't you ask me where I am taking you?" Arnav asked!
Khushi just looked at him and said," Nahi!"( no)
"Kyun?"(why)

8 comments:

tanmay said...

i love u arnav... for holding on to the pain... n still mking sure she feels cared for.. nt knowing u r hurting within..

baki baad me di... t seems to hv relapsed.. need to tk her to doc.

Algol Betelgeuse said...

TEN SPLENDID CHAPTERS!THANK YOU FOR YOU FOR WRITING THIS AMAZING STORY.

jyothi parsi said...

Hey wonderful update ANU,
Loved it...the way Arnav trying to give her n also get himself normal life...A ROMANTIC SUNSET...what more can he Ask....but of course he can't lose the golden opportunity ....
Hope this trip remains hurdle n enemy free...
But will the enemies counterattack ..?

Lakshmi said...

Beautiful update Anu. Love this Asr...shatir dimaag..knows how to give back to his enemies...at the same time the way he handles his Rani Saa....sometimes aggressive, teasing , caring and loving her...the pictures , backdrop , sunset all apt for romance....well done and congrats for 10 chapters....we will demand more....keep going Anu....

tanmay said...

ok... so i m bak ...

loved the simple thgs... like watching a sunset... sitting next to each other, without the need fr words.. holding hands .. fr no particular reason..

tht i m sure wud convince khushi more than arnav's words can in the current mess tht they r living.. :)

n khushi.. hv mercy on him.. he cud manage only a couple of weeks of leave.. utne me hi maan jao.. warna hw is he going to manage :) :)

n since he has already started his vacation... give him a happy vacation to remember fr life ;)


loved how arnav manages to stay in control even whn he feels he is losing all the control on himself.. hw he can think straight n rational, even when everythg seems to b going to wrong way.. most importantly khushi doesnt seem to understand n support him.

waiting fr more di :)

kaajal chauhan said...

awesome jst lovely Anu di...



oh jst love ASR sharati dimag...n wow heart filled wid d kushi bng happy like a child... oh jst superb...n grrr y d hell Arnav dnt confess dat yeah he love khushi... n nw jst
yeah looking frwd fr d update of loveydovey sunset togethr of d couple..

Disha said...

You said it !! 10 splendid chapters indeed !! Congratulations and Thank You Anu :)

So finally with this update we have some alone time for Mr and Mrs Raizada !! ;)

Update soon yaar ,,,, Want to know what Arnav is gonna ask from her :)

anamika said...

Cool .. a trap laid
But seriously they r both very unpredictable so it could be anything