Sunday, 24 March 2013

P-11


THE PURSUIT
(The Mirage-II)



Pic credit: SS NAIR


Khushi looked at him and he dipped his head and caught her lips with his in a slow drugging kiss! The distant chirp of a water bird made him release her lips after a good minute or two!!


Arnav just sheepishly smiled at Khushi who was surprised! He parried! What did she think? That he would ask her to kiss him or something like that? NEVER!!! He smirked... instead he just claimed her!Let the Rani Saa of Ranpur know that she is marked as his territory!

Khushi was surprised... he was about to ask her was he not? Then how could he? She fumed!



"Yeah! Arnav said reading her thoughts aloud! I won't ask! I claim what's mine! So don't even think I was about to ask something about that or about making you mine! When the time is right I shall.... make you mine in every sense of the word! No asking!"


"Accha! Tho aap kya maangney waaley they phir?" khushi asked curiously!


(Ok! What were you about to ask then?)


Arnav planted tiny kisses on her face as he talked..."This coming week ,"


"uhun" Khushi said,
"whole of it..." he went on...

"haan..." She prompted...
"you..." he paused...
"bolona?" Khushi could not wait anymore!


"...will listen to me!"There he said it!
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11 comments:

Disha said...

This guy seriously leaves me hyperventilating with his Khushi ko patao tactics !!

The reference he made of her babuji was very well placed here in the context where he was trying to make her understand the depth of his emotions for her ,,, though he himself is also equally mule headed to not give this emotion a name of love which it rightfully deserves however he is getting better with his communication skills for sure.

But then the way this update ended i have a feeling Khushi will again go in panic mode just when things were looking a little bright as compared to earlier....


tanmay said...

i knw disha di... luks like khushi is again going to panic...
bt arnav did mk absolute sense... even to khushi i feel...

i m just hoping tht my dearest darling writer wud put some sense into khushi to think rationally abt wht arnav is trying to explain...

n as arnav goes on explaining his pt of view towards the "flowery word love" i really think, tht he probably has more understanding of it.. than anyone else.. who wud probably keep on repeating the word..

i love his sudden changes.. shows hw much in control he is...

waiting fr the next one di..

GoldenHaze said...

ab ya jo ober sheesh gath bandhan hain( Laloo istyle mein padhiye) ooka hum khandan karthey hi! Kah sey ki ye dui mahilaa tanmay aur Disha humri pursuitwa ke peechey padhey rahey aur Khushya ko manaye rahe... eeka kuch karey ka padi!
:-)
Thanks guys

Disha said...

I am as stubborn as arnav and khushi my dear writer sa ,,,, jab tak they are not together in every way ...apka peecha nahi chodungi !!!!

Hi tanmay !!!!

Lakshmi said...

Khushi can never escape this Asr's charm....loving ur romantic updates...looking forward

stories.1408 said...

this guy can actually make any girl senseless par ranisaa bhi kahaan kam hai.hope d ending doesnt make her move back again on their emotional rendevouz

stories.1408 said...

this guy can actually make any girl senseless par ranisaa bhi kahaan kam hai.hope d ending doesnt make her move back again on their emotional rendevouz

Neen Liz said...

Awesome update. Arnav made her agree to obey him 4 one week. Liked how arnav explained things to khushi. Di's god gave him a woman with rare quality of royal pain, poor arnav. But he himself invited this. Now khushi wil panic and create an issue over the wound.

tanmay said...

same here di... if u dont relent by the comments... i m sure to bug u more by calls ;)

just read the chapter again... n i again m nt happy with khushi...

she wants her yes n no shud matter to arnav.. bt did she ever care abt his yes n no??
she thinks tht her decision wud save his life.. bt never gave importance to the fact, tht he doesnt want a life of tht kind... which he explicitly told her..

n now she blames him tht he doesnt care abt her yes n no, n her views...
pls khushi.. i love u fr the strong woman tht u r... dont mk urself luk like a person with double standards..

if u r trying to protect arnav by nt caring fr his views... he too is trying to protect u ( frm the unwanted responsibility of the world) by nt listening to ur adamant stance.

as of khushi ka mannna.. i m sure di.. she has to relent.. sooner or later... else it wud become a stagnant dead lock... which wud nt b good fr anyone.. na khushi, na arnav, na hum bechare readers.. n jab hum jaise reader dukhi honge.. to aapko kaun bachaega.. :) :) :) :P :P

waiting fr more di.. :)

anamika said...

Ranisaa needs to let it loose n its high time she trust her husband

Paramjeet said...

wow lovely updates !!! i was feeling that you are not updating such checked on FB and saw there are two updates... loved both 10 & 11.. Arnav is right Khushi should take into account that they are together in this and nobody will understand their relation and why torture themselves instead of not enjoying life together.. Arnav was badly hurt in that attack on him at sheesh mahal, Khushi is again gone into panic attack after seeing injury on his left shoulder.. will be waiting for next update anxiously.. and would love to see what does Arnav do to bring trust factor in his and khushi's relation.. he have taken her YES by doing all ministration on her but will he able to make his high chin madam to follow him.. waiting to see that..