Tuesday, 26 March 2013

P-12




THE PURSUIT-12
(THE MIRAGE-II)


Pic Credit: SS NAIR


"Aap ko itni chot aayi?" Khushi asked incredulously! "Aur aapney humey bathaaya nahi!"
( You got hurt so badly and you didn't tell me?)

"Khushi I will tell you everything! But after we reach home! Ok?" Arnav said hugging her tight still!

"Per aap ko... "Arnav Just put his index finger on her lips and said, "I promise I will tell you everything! But Please don't spoil this lovely evening!"

Khushi Just closed her eyes and became quiet!

Arnav realised that She was hurting! He really was touched by how much she cared for others and for him- who had inflicted so much of pain on her!

But he was also determined not to let go! Neither then nor ever for that matter! He took her hand and kept it on his chest where he was not bandaged and said," dil ki marammath karney aap haina Rani saa?"

( You are there to mend my heart isn't it?)

He saw that tears trickled down from her eyes! He only thought of comforting her and she ...He shook his head in defeat!

He immediately kissed her lightly on her lips and said," please Khushi! Don't! I just want us to spend some time together! I will deal with all this at SheshMahal! We are also getting late as we need to be at the view point in the next four minutes!"


"Do you know what I want to ask you as the first thing in this week?" Arnav enquired holding her face with both his hands!

She nodded her approval...
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17 comments:

tanmay said...

kab se darshi ki shaam ka intezaar kara ri ho di... ab tak to karai ni ;)

har baar threat bhi dilwa deti ho arnav se.. n fir bhi...
uff.. arnav ka to pata ni.. i m sure hamara patience jaroor wear off kar jaega ;) :P

awesome conversation between the two.. beautiful understanding..
absolutely serene, more than the sunset...

n raja saa going poetic... aaye haye :) tht was tooooo goood :)

amazing start to my day :)
thanks di :):)

waiting fr next :)

stories.1408 said...

beautiful.never knew this meaning of arnav.update was very very romantic

Sruthi said...

Beautiful update....
Both are equally stubborn....

Mithila Torr said...

Beautiful update! Did Arnav go for a speaking course..seems to talk much..good improvement ;) Poor Khushi..give some leniency..she is after all new to all these emotions..Wow first time a new meaning to Arnav..I didn't notice it until u said it

Farheen Sufi said...

Just came across on your FF on IF and simply fell in love with it... U r an amazing amazing writer and this story is just addictive... I could feel every emotion of khushi as if I was feeling all those emotions with her, her helplessness, sadness everything... All in all I am just blown away with this story of yours.

Farheen75

tanmay said...

forgot to mention...

khushi's realisation tht his first demand actually just shows his love fr her, n his need n wish to b with her all the time.. mking sure tht she also enjoys being arnd him .. n not pressurised... was too gd..

i m sure if she continues with this line of thinking.. she wud soon b able to see tht he is hopelessly n irrevocably in love with her :) madly.. deeply.. etc etc :):)

btw.. already read it 5 times n narrated it too..

up fr next read.. might add another comment after tht too :D

n after each comment.. i soooo enjoy the fact tht i get to say........

waiting fr next one di :)

Prabha L said...

Awww im in dream land the conversation is so lovely can these get any more cute n adorable..superb i was reading the story listening to Raabta song its so apt to the story excellent after every update of urs im fallng short of words u r n excellent writer i want you to get mirage n pursuit published i will b da 1st person to buy both of dem I feel really lucky to get a chance to read such gem of FF....update it soon

GoldenHaze said...

Hey Thanu Divya(Prabha) and Farheen Thanks! You just made my day! Its heartening to know that my work is appreciated! Ia m honoured!

tanmay said...

i totally agree with prabha .. the raabta song soooo suits these 2.. our dearest darling arnav-khushi :)

n i love the song collection of aman :) gd going dear... put in some more songs in tht collection fr their realisation :) they do need all the help they can get... b it in the form of aman's song collection, or buaji's apt remarks, or nani n shyam's timely disclosure of facts..

every single character is in absolutely rt place at the rt time.. to mk sure tht the ignorant lovers r forced to think it again.. think it thru ... to the end :) :)

aquariuslp said...

That was an amazing update. Totally loved it!! :)

Disha said...

I also want to see the sunset with Arnav Ji,, and i promise to call him "Arnav" !!


Anu what are you doing yaar .... i am loosing my mind over this naughty and flirty Arnav !!

tanmay said...

ok disha di... time nw to get our husband's to read pursuit.. atleast select parts... n tk trng ;)

Lakshmi said...

Anu it's really beautiful....feel like i was also witnessing the sun set....very well written...a beautiful sunset ...very romantic....

anamika said...

Rajasa ke naam ka matlab to bada hi khubsurat bataya aapne
Aur abhi to rajasa ki dhamki suneke baad to bada intezaar rahega ga mare ko agle bhag ka

Disha said...

ha ha tanu darling ,,,if he reads my comments here he will ban me from the Pursuit !! hahahahaha



Ranbir Singh Anand said...

Sshhoooooooorrryyyyyy for not commenting the last updates.

All updates have been so lovely and also beautifully written. Love to read them getting closer and spending time together alone.

And Arnav telling her, that he never will leave her and be with her till the end. Hope this statements will Khushi stop running away and traing to keep distance from him.

But all the talks of Arnav towards Khushi, staying together till death aparts them, seeing the sunshine in her eyes and so on, if that is not love, what then?

And I appreciate highly, that u still managed to update although u r very and more busy these days.

Thanks a lot and waiting for next part to come. :-)

jyothi parsi said...

Wow... Gr8 one...Arnav trying o spend quality time with Khushi just as wife n husband n trying to gain her trust ...
WELL DONE....He is showing his romantic side n also using his charms....naturally K hushi will have hard tim resisting him...