Friday, 19 April 2013

P-23

THE PURSUIT-23
(THE MIRAGE)

Pic Credit: SSNAIR

Khushi just stood still but she was shivering from inside! What did he mean! ...and why should she take this crap from him or anyone?
Arnav just stepped out from behind the curtain and bolted the door and took her in his arms!
He had heard the creep and as a man, if he felt a little rattled at the cruelty of the b#$%^&* then, how could she take it? He parried!

"Khushi! Just relax!" he said and felt her numb! 
She just looked at him and he said," No Khushi No! Now please don't again start the crap about me leaving you for my safety! Now you know these people are after you irrespective of me!Please tell me you are all right!" He rested his chin on her forehead taking her into his arms completely"

Khushi just stood for a second and said," Nai Arnavji hum insey nahi darengey!"
( No Arnavji! I won't be afraid of these people anymore!)

"Thats my girl!" Arnav exclaimed relieved and immediately said," Can I say something?"
"Kya?" ( What?) Khushi asked a little surprised.
"Merey sath chalogi date pey?"( Will you go on a date with me?)Arnav asked out of the blues.

"Kya?Aap?...Hum?...Date???"( What?...You... Me...date?) Khushi stammered!
"Haan you have heard it right!" Arnav said looking at her amusedly.
"Ma...Magar kaisey?" ( But How?) Khushi asked.
Arnav knelt on his knee and said with flourish "Rani saa Kya aap humaarey sath chalengi?"
( Will you go with me Your Majesty?)
Khushi was too rattled to answer when he got up and backed her to the wall swiftly saying "you have two options... haan ya yes!"( Yes or Ok)
Khushi smiled that was typical of him!
"Ladki hansi tho fasi" he said and lifted her in his arms and swung her round like a small girl!
"Per kaisey Arnavji?"( But How Arnavji?) she asked him forgetting everything for a moment!
"Kaisey?( How?) I have it all figured out!" He said smugly!
"You just say yes!" He said ardently.
Khushi stared at him!

11 comments:

Disha said...

This was one full on dhinka chika update writer sa !!!

Arnav Ji at his flirtatious best bas aur mujhe kuch nahi chahiye !!

Date !!!
Khushi definitely deserves this more than ever for all the shit she is going through only Arnav can make her feel like a young woman!!!

So holi is around the corner and knowing you i am ready for all the action and drama to follow !!!

Kaushu said...

Beautiful Anu. Khushi poured her heart out by saying "Hum kya kare". I hope both of them will keep their differences aside and have fun during the date.

Neha said...
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Neha said...

Nice Update.
Read you previous work Mirage, what an amazing story.

diya bansal said...

lovely update di ..

loved the way arnav changed her mood

treat to read ...

i was waiting for the updte eagerly

awesome update

please update soon di

hoping holi will be great ..

tanmay said...

hey di... though the ntire chapter was toooooooooo gd :)

the stand out was the confession frm arnav.. in the end...
hd i been in khushi's place i wud never hv wanted him to say " i love u " after wht he did say...

i love u does sound way too small infront of wht he said.. it was practial as well as emotional.. n tht is y i liked it the best in the whole chapter..

as usual his flirting was gd.. his understanding of her stepping on his feet as her hving n feeling a rt on him, was beautiful...

his aceptance tht he plays dirty... n she too fair fr her own gd.. was absolutely rt :) n honest...

as of khushi n her dilemma... well sochne ki jaroorat nahi hai.. kehne ko kuch ahi hi nahi.. n karne ko to kafi kuch hai... which i m aure arnav is dying to do :)


waiting fr more di... waiting fr more more n more :)

kaajal chauhan said...

awesome anu di.. as usual amazing...

n abt.. review ...

frm start i loved d way Arnav changed himself frm aggresive to loving n caring husband...
(oh how i love to get a guy like him..lolZ*blush* *blush* :) )
i like d way u potray d places of Ranpur ..
( as i always say u r ROYAL AUTHENTIC WRITER :* )
DAN d meaning of Arnav rathr dan Ocean was described fatastically di..
( bow down to u fr dat.. _/\_ )
n most important Confrontation or i shud say love fights of jetwa pride chin n Mr. flirtously romantic ASR... I JUST LOVED IT..
d way Khushi stand for her Raja Sa.. is jst mindblowing...
And Arnav always try to make her feel light n tension free n trying best to blow off her worries.. his efforts wid patience.. ( amazing.. )
aahh how cn frgt buaji who is alwayz der fr d couple ..( achanak aa jana or to help Arnav Babua he he he..)
n grr d villan Chandis.. (i think Rane also nw).. m jst able to hate dem more n more... grr :-/
n now ArShi r trying best to sought out all... hope to get more n more di...
muuaahhh... :* :* :*
n all ur chaptrs r so awesome dat i can c it happening infront of my eyes.... ( i jst missed 7-8 days on IF.. so i jst got through ur blog in midnight n read all remaining parts..)
last but not least i loved ur poem..( hats off to u... n apolgizr dat i cudnt snd u mah poem as m havng last semester so busy wid circuits n projsts submissions..:'( )

Lots of love n hugs AnU DI...
dis time nt bear but tight wala hug..hahaha... ;)

GoldenHaze said...

Hey kajal Welcome back dear and thanks for the review.I personally liked clearing the meaning of Arnav as what seems to be going around is not true... thanks for everything...

jyothi parsi said...

Hey ANU...
Loved the update....
I'm falling in love with this all changed arnav...changed in terms of loving n expressing his feelings for khushi at the same time...being her strength...n support....OH???JUST LOVE HIM.....and of course the credit goes to u...if not for ur writing skills...n scene n charecter depicting abilities...also getting to know a bit about Rajasthan...as I have only read abt in few books n movies....but feel like going there....
Now coming to my dear dear khushi...such a dilemma...being in love with her husband...who is such a charmer...n seducer...n her nativity...n the combination just sizzles up n fills nthe air with passionate romance...ur writing ability n this front is also AWSOME....mind blowing ....
But very apprehensive abt HOLI update...as with the direct threat...n so many enemies...really want them both to be safe n sound...n wish for good to have upper hand than bad....

nimmi(aksuji) said...

wow this is surely a new twist now, .......but we know arnav loves khushi .......lets see how khushi this........
awesome update..........

Sanaya Irani said...

just in love with this the pursuit