THE PURSUIT-48/1
THE MIRAGE-II
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Khushi was standing at the edge of the pool with with her dupatta very loosely wrapped round her!
Arnav looked around and found her on the far side and reached her in two strides and just enveloped her from behind and she tried to move away clutching the sheer dupatta for modesty although it was not much of a help!
Arnav was furious she left him and walked away! He was speaking on the phone and she just slipped away quietly! He did not like it!
"Khushi!" he called her...
She just did not acknowledge him! Arnav was beyond control and the phone which was necessary yet a little late, already irritated him!... And when Khushi moved away he lost his cool!
"No Khushi" Arnav's voice pierced through the sounds of the night -of chirping crickets and rustling leaves up the cliff!
"I want you! now! I cannot wait any longer and you are mine! You belong with me in my home and in my bed!" he said furiously!
She just stared at him how can he say that? When he is not clear about her at all?Even after all this, there was still so much that was shrouded in mystery!
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11 comments:
Awesome part
Finally they r one
Loved it
Eagerly waiting for d next
kamal hi kar diya di... finally :) :)
i dont knw if i m happy fr arnav n khushi, or i m dying to tease u fr it :P
god i m dying to tease u more :)
n since the chapter was awesome n highly awaited.. i wud forgoe on absolutely irrational thot process of khushi in the begining.. :)
going to read it again.. n u knw tht i might nt really comment a lot on this one here :)
next one me i guess we get to knw whom maan saw.. :) or mayb.. next mrng ;) :)
Anu... i am in shock.. this was so unexpected ... itni baar dhoka kha ke kela mila hai ki now i am speechless!
I will return with a proper comment!!
I LOVED IT UTNA TO PUCCA HAI !
u r so rt.. artheritis hi nahi.. yahan to lagta hai too much expectation n will ke karan hum dupari dene wale don me hi convert hone wale the :):)
bacha liya aapne :)
disha di... i just send u fb msgs to tell u tht ur prayers hv finally been answered.. so hv mine :)
n the one we were praying to... arnav-khushi ki kismat... has actually surpassed all expectations :)
beautiful.. seems absolutely open, n yet absolutely under wraps :)
very soulful :)
n the best was.. 'my love' n yes he did call u tht khushi :)
another best was 'i love u arnav' n oh we too want u to say it again n again n again khushi... arnav sounds much better :) though i m absolutely in love with arnavji as well :)
i loved his anklets condition.. i mean she has them whn they r together, else he has it :)
though i m nt sure abt hte mangalsootra thg.. bt fr sure it sounded very very honest n very very in love :) pure.. absolutely blissful pure love.. no bonds.. like he said..
i m saying i m nt sure.. since i like this particular bond..
as of conversations tht khushi wants.. sweety conversations can happen only whn u let him complete his sentences.. if u stop n interrupt him everytime.. hw is he supposed to speak.. n though u didnt ask.. u want him to tell u of his own will, n ranisaa... aapke bina pohe raja saa keh re hain to apne hi mann se to keh re hain.. kehne to dijiye :)
anyways.. is sab pe hum baad me lad lenge :) abhi aap dono hum sab ko bhool jayen.. which i m sure is nt even the last thot on ur minds ;)
more to follow di ;).... next reread ke baad ;)
That was the most beautiful union of two people who r completely in love with each other... Simply loved the update
Farheen75
i hv another question fr u dearest rani saa...
ek taraf aap sharing ki baat karte ho.. n aaj bhi aap khud bhi apni prob share ni kar re ho.. owing to the issue tht u dont knw wht to say n how to say...
mayb.. same is the prob with arnav.. mayb he too doesnt knw wht to say n how to say...
pls consider..
Finally woh shub din a hi gaya shayad isiko kehte hein sabr ka phal meetha hota hein.... Wow i hav 2 hunt 4 words to describe dis update thx 4 dis sweet update....update it soon ( yeh dil maangey more ;-) )
Anu, i read two updates together...absolutely beautiful...i don't 've much words for these updates...u nailed it...Arnav Khushi has come a long way in their relation...eagerly waiting to know ...what next???
liked the way he says "ab baandh raha hun tumhey khushi, kahin dur math chali jana mujhey chodkey"
i liked tht he did remember his conditions with khushi's payal n waistband.. :) n didnt forget to mention them as well :)
n i like the way he tells her.. nt asks her.. tking full rt on her.. claiming her nt only as his. bt mayb as a prt of him..
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