Tuesday, 6 August 2013

P-54/3

THE PURSUIT-54/3
THE MIRAGE-II
Pic Credit: SSNAIR


Arnav tried again and La's voice greeted him saying..." Yes babe! I am here at SeeshMahal! Where are you?"

"Lavanya how did you happen ...here?? Why?' Arnav asked irritatedly!

"Why? For you! There is some more unfinished business between us darling!" La said sweetly! Too very sweetly looking at Deepthimaan and Khushi!


Deepthiman's fists clenched along with his jaw and Khushi caught his arm in a tight grip! She shouldn't have come out and exposed him to this! She did not want anyone to get into this! Arnavji was supposed to handle this and he shall!... coz this being with LA she did not want anyone to interween! And it was not good for Maan to get into this as he is one of the accused! She could not subject him to that kind of humiliation! Agreed that he was there with them! That did not mean... any one could say anything to him and treat him like crap!

"Where are you? I will come to your room ASR" La was saying! Deepthiman opened his mouth to talk, but Khushi hissed," Nai! Maan! Aap kuch nahi bolengey!"( You wont say a word!)

"That B@#$%! How dare she Rani Saa I..." Deepthiman choked with anger.
"Please!" Khushi hissed!
LA cut the call and said," I wonder what agreement you had with ASR! May be you worked out some timings... between your ex and the current! Great going i must say!"


15 comments:

tanmay said...
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jyothi parsi said...

There they go again and lavanya succeed in creating the rift again....but hiding khushis wedding photos with maan n that whole fiasco is really taking up the toll on ARSHI relationship...and very true she said as long as there r loop holes of communication n understanding between them outsiders will succeed in intruding n creating rift n mental anguish for them....but I guess all these inner turmoils n fights will take all of MAANS n Arnavs concentration n risk ARSHIs security....

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Farheen Sufi said...

The lack of communication is taking a heavy toll on their already fragile relationship... Rather than sharing and talking abt issues they both r trying to take decisions on each others part giving a way to their enemies to take advantage of this fact... They both r walking on egg shells around each other.

Khushi should stop this idiocy of always judging Arnav and his intentions, she thinks the worse of everything which he does with a single track focus that he is forced to do it instead of trusting his love for her and that whatever he is doing is out of love and only love for her... If she doesn't stop this habit if hers then she is not gonna hurt herself but would irreparable damage to their marriage.

Arnav should stop hiding things from her but I guess he hides everything from bcz of past experience where Khushi wanted to save him by pushing him away from her and doesn't wanna give her a chance again to repeat that mistake of hers again as he has worked really hard to bring khushi close to him but he has to make her understand clearly that this is not how marriages work and they both have to start sharing their innermost feelings with each other so as to avoid any unnecessary heart aches and misunderstandings.

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GoldenHaze said...

Thanmay

Khushi knows ASR very well! PAyal her sister is marrie dto Aakash remember? She already gave lots of info! I wrote an entire chapter between shyam n Khushi where Khushi had not seen ASR in teh wedding but knows what he is! I 'd rather you think about other characters too rather than trying to see what you want to see and say what you think as balanced!
@Jyothi! You are bang on! Arnav does not share more so coz of Khushi's insecurity about his life! We all are for getting she saw him being attacked! I wish Thanmay also reads old chapters before lobbying about Arnav!
But Its not entirely Khuhsi! Arnav does not share period!Why cant we accept that! Even in the show he did not! Never told khushi! And Khushi never mistrusted ARNAV! Not you Jyothi! Thanmay I can understand! I can present chapters dialogues where even Arnav asks Khushi what does she know of him to trust him so much! She never mistrusted him! Never! But you guys need to know... she wants him to accept her as she did! After realisation!
Thanmay I thought you said you were convinced or you want to be! I only see that you are not and you don't wnat to be convinced! Fine by me! But please do not try to wean every thing towards the same logic! My characters are far superior dear! Please read Mirage once again!

GoldenHaze said...

@ Thanmay

Khushi did not reveal anything to Arnav initially as she thought, He married her for some reason and he should not be belittled!
When she knew of teh money scam and other things she did not talk coz how odd it would look to tell him she can buy him off ten times over if she breached to any poiltical party( Which ofcourse she wont) Remember they were not so comfortable with each other! And till Pagphera they thought she will be queen and then shashi will take over so asked her to keep it till that day as it might cause Embarassment to Raizadas! But the death threats made them reverse the council decree and Khushi becomes Rani! She does not tell not coz of trust but coz of fear for his safety! I also support Arnav that its his personality trait he does not want to share thats all! And Khushi is in soup coz of that not teh other way! HE did not share in the first place his reason for wedding! Thanmay u should remember! Else please watch the show or read Mirage again dear! It started with ASR not Khushi! Then he has no right to ask anything else! But Khushi realised and gave up! HE is in the process! I am tierd of telling this to you who does not get down from Arnav at all! Rest is your view dear! Now thats it from me

GoldenHaze said...

@ FArheen thanks for participating dear! Yeah thats the problem with 90% of the couples! Communication but its a trait in personality! Arnav is so by nature!Khushi should only adjust and she did too! Till date he has not clearly mentioned reason to get married! Just random questions and tell Khushi he had an issue! But Khushi learnt the heard way that he is a man of honour! Her reallisation of love for Arnav has come! Let him also realise and bridge the gap! How come suddenly this becomes Cheating taunting? I don't understand! Its nok jhonk! Give tehma break tehy r marrie for four months and under strange circumstances! Let them grow on to one another!

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GoldenHaze said...

@Thanmay please read all your comments since the beginning of the controversy your personal mails chat history and tell me that you are honest! Thats all I have to say!
Thank you for starting a discussion.I appreciate it immensely! I mentioned it on OF too! I say what I mean and stand by it! I do not write one thing and say the other go to every door knocking saying this is right! Coz right would be so irrespective!
And Thanmay
How a wife or a husband must be is an ideal situation we are talking about a scenario! If it were so then there wont be a story! Instead of sabotaging the story calling it your most loved one you should have presented your facts rather than your whims!And the world knows whether what I etched as Khushi is Khushi or not! She is the same! When you can see the other side of it I shall be willing to discuss! Otherwise you are welcone to your single focal line ARNAV! And his character that you think is the best! ( Which all of us like)
I thank you for taking out your valuable time to further and endorse your one sided argument without a care to facts! Coz it increased participation! I can never thank you enough for the support! I could not hav epulled it off with just writing a story!You will always be dear no matter what! This would be the last from me on this as if you do not want to listen and if you say you are trying to get convinced and still just try to push your views through everyones throat including mine who actually wrote the characters, I have nothing else to say my dear!

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