Tuesday, 8 October 2013

P-59/5

THE PURSUIT-59/5
THE MIRAGE-II

Pic Credit:SSNAIR

"Khushi... "Arnav called as she went round the corner towards the Halla Chowk! There was no answer! Where did she go? There was no one there? Was there any other way out to the other side? there must be! It was a place that had openings into the east also! May be she ran towards the Amrithmay! But why would she take that path! She would prefer to go back to teh Gol baraamda and then go into the kitchen section! He contemplated!
He heard a noise and looked around but found nothing!

"Security!" He shouted and a guard came after his second call! 
"Why is this area not cordoned?" He barked.
"Sir it is covered not cordoned!" The guard explained!
Arnav understood! The outer circle was cordoned off! This was inside SeeshMahal so there was no need to cordon it off! It was covered and there would be closed circuit TV footage too! But why was he thinking that way! She must have ran into the kitchen for sure! Coz for going into the Gol Baraamda she had to go back teh way she came and then she would had had to pass by him!


11 comments:

Paramjeet said...

hey hi sorry yaar was busy with things from last months.. today got time and read all the parts from 55 to last one in one go.. you have maintained the suspense very nicely.. where is khushi have she gone through those stairs.. hope she is fine.. arnav is getting desperate for his wife as he wants to revenge that kiss of a gay.. but it was beautiful.. khushi and her antics.. 5 kisses were beautiful and last one maan enjoyed it more than arnav and khushi.. loved the friendship between all of them.. megha have seen gulabo pushing the pillar.. hope she helps maan and arnav with details.. do update soon dear.. i read you are not happy as you are not getting desired response.. can understand like i was busy maybe everyone else too.. but i will truly comment whenever i come across the update.. loved the updates and looking forward to know what happened to our dear khushi.. where is she and hope she is fine..

GoldenHaze said...

Param! Thank you so much! You are one of my regular and favourite readers! Thank you so much for your support! Its really worth writing for a few readers like you! But DID I am planning to amke it restricted as it really feels sad writing to mute audience! understand people can get busy but once in atleast three updates they can just comment a sentence or so!I have no issues otherwise as I write to enjoy as well as entertain my readers! Thank you once again my dearest

Anu Reddy said...

Nice update Anu, you are maintaining the suspense.

jayanthy said...

Nice update and the mystery continues....Sad that this story going to end soon. But I am really enjoying Destine You and Me and looking forward for DID.

GoldenHaze said...

Anu and Jayanthy thank you so much! Its really difficult for me too as I had been writing The mirage and pursuit almost every day for the past year! But well everything has to end! Thank you so much for your support and appreciation

Shubhanjli Saxena said...

What did you say... this is going to end. OMG. I am feeling so sad. This is one of my most favorite FF's. But i know every good thing has to end.
I am loving this suspense. Megha has seen Gulabo disappearing so may be she can help. Where has Khushi gone? Hope she is fine.
Looking forward for DID.

Siri said...

Lovely update ,..suspense is killing

cheriebinny said...

Nice update. Megha playing sherlock holmes

cupcakzdps said...

awsum updt
uff yea suspense

Lakshmi said...

Finally read all updates...so heading to climax...

Disha said...

Hey Anu i am finally here again... real life is just sucking big time nowadays !!! But i had to make time for my Raja and Rani Sa ...

Now where is this madam ???

Off to read the next update :)
Hope alls well and megha discloses what she has scene to some one soon!