THE PURSUIT-60/4
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Arnav and Deepthimaan reached the quarries at Raayi and waited on the outer cordon as they did not want to alert the people inside about their presence although, they by then knew Shikhar was expecting them! As Arnav predicted, a group of eleven commandos landed within seven minutes of their arrival from the Ahmedabad Army base and they carried high precision equipment including trackers and detonator diffusers as a part of their bomb squad team!
The only catch in the situation was they were not given the go ahead still, and they wouldn't budge but time was ticking away! Arnav finally took a call and said," Deepu I shall go in and try to have a dialogue..."
12 comments:
wow an update of my fav.. loved it.. quite action packed.. arnav knows to play his card.. he made such an offer to chandi that he can't deny..it was fun to see chandi asking his son to trust arnav then the other man.. well khushi is quietly watching everything.. area have been cardoned.. lets see what happens next.. arnav is master of game.. he will get his rani saa back in one piece along with peace from the ever gone war with chandi.. lets see how it happens.. will be waiting for next part eagerly do update soon.. also will be looking forward to your other ARSHI story which will follow this one.. but sorry couldn't read the dym.. tried thrice.. i can't think of anybody else with khushi and it doesn't appeal me.. if you want you can stop sending me updates of DYM.. but do send me link for DID.. that is ARSHI story na.. will be looking forward to it.. well mine fav pursuit is ending.. bit sad.. best wishes for DYM and DID...
Wow Anu this is an action packed update, cannot wait till Arnav puts an end to all the Chandis lol!!! Please send me link to DID, you know I am game for what ever you write :-)
Thrilling... want to know what is Arnav's n mann plan..
nice update
Please send me the link for DID. I am up for it too.
Anu you are not only good at romance but also writing action thriller :). I will miss pursuit. Please add me to DID mailing list. Thanks.
Omg One complete power packed anti climax wala maha update !
Waiting for Arnav to get back his PRINCESS for good now !
Thank god that Arnav and Maan thought of an idea rather than Arnav getting killed, but I just love that how he was more than ready to die for Khushi and hope he will teach shikhar a lesson that he will never forget and would never ever dream of Khushi again.
Farheen75
Hey anu...I must admit this is one of the best ff I have ever read.u r an amazing writer.plzz don't end this soon & do add me to ur mailing list...plz find some1 good enough 4 maan:-)
thanks Anne! You need to send me your gmail Id at thoughtsgallore@gmail.com for getting added to my readers list dear...
Hey...absolutely love this story...was wondering if you were planning to continue it?
Hey yar I m a great fan of yours
I love all your writings
Plz add me my email id is gshubhi05@gmail.com
Finaly i found ur blog bt cnt read it..
Want to read all ur story desperately..
Cn u invite me in ur blog plz.. My id is
mitra.roy589@gmail.com
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