THE PURSUIT-17
(THE MIRAGE)
Khushi turned around to find Arnav rubbing her hair with a towel!
She just blinked and said," Aap kab aaye?"
( when did you come?)
He smiled!
Khushi got angry! She pulled her hair from his hands and put it over her left shoulder denying access to him and turned away and said "hum kitney pareshan hain aapke wajah sey aap ko pathaa bhi hain?"
Bathaathey kyun nahi.. Phone bhi tho nahi kiya! Kyun?
Boliye!"
( Do you know how worried I was for you? Why don't you tell me whats going on? You didn't even call! Why?)
She turned and smarted as she found Buaji where Arnav was there a few minutes back!
"Arey Parameshwari neechey sey uper taq kya phone karthi?" Buaji chided her.
( You expect me to call from one room to the other?)
"Buaji woh kahan hain?" Khushi asked looking around!
( Where is he?)
"Kaun thithaliya?" she said drying Khushi's hair!
"Wo..." Khushi said very softly.
"Arnav Babua? Woh tho abhi taq aaya nahi na?"
( Arnav? He has not returned yet)
"Hey Devi Mayya!" she closed her eyes and prayed to the goddess!
"Accha tho oo ki chintha hain tumhey! Tho phone karlethi!"
( Oh you are worried for him! So you you should have called him!)
"Nahi uthaa rahein hain buaji! Switched off hogaya hai ab tho!" Khushi wailed.
( he is not picking his call and now its switched off).
"Accha? Shashi babua ko bathaayein? Per oo tho Delsi nikalgaya!"Buaji asked.
( Shall I ask Shashi? He has left to Delhi)
Khushi did not know what to do!
12 comments:
seriously di!! hallucinating !!! i mean seriously !!!!!
kitne khush the hum... tht arnav wud b bak.. bt nahi.. wo to buaji nikli.. :P
abhi to hum theek se khush bhi ni ho pa re ki arnav finally wapas aa gaya.. who knws.. next chapter u tell us tht this too wa a hallucination.. :(
anyways.. the chapter has a lot of thgs tht i really love :)
the fact tht khushi seems to hv realised hw deep her feelings r fr arnav.. hw he is so much a part of his life tht she cant seem to think of a life without him...
how she doesnt like anyone talking bad abt him.. n is ready to defend him to any extent..
the fact tht she carried fwd the act started by arnav, of specifying shikhar as khushi's brother :),
n of threatening hte chandi's openly.. though khushi fr sure was far more open abt it :)
loved the conversation she had with her mom.. n seriously mom is the best solution to the worst probs..
waiting fr the next one di..
Nice update...the way u 've written that something may happen...but relieved at the end ....Khushi missing ASR and he knows that now...looking forward...
oohh!! that was beautiful!!
SO happy that Khushi was able to taken over without Arnav's presence!
It did not matter if it was not Arhilicious ... Just an update full of Khushi dint seem bad at all!! she was able to carry it out so well ...
And the ending was soothing... she talking to her mother ... and when Arnav happened ... it was bliss .. pure bliss!
Thanks for the update Anu! :)
~Leena
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pls update soon :( man i am in love with this story
Loved the update. loved how khushi stood for arnav against bhairav, even though it was not surprising knowing her character... she wud have done the same even if she hadn't realized her love. :) Ab yeh last mein was it actually arnav or just her hallucination? I'm not keeping much hope :P
waiting for the next update dii... pls updt sooooonnn :)
thank God its buaji :p
its great that khushi realised her feelings for arnav ... I like the way she doesnt like anyone talking bad abt him.. and the way she defended him .. The way she talk to bhairav and his wife and threatening them openly..
and loved the conversation she had with her mom too.. waiting for the next chapter .. I hope this time its really arnav who touched her :p
xoxo
dsbj
Hey ANU....I thought ATLEAST this timei should be first to comment on u log...but alas...I'm again late...
No worries...hope ur reading my comments...
Anyways...loved this chapter ...Alot lot lot lot ...
Khushi realized her love ...fought for her husband....feels his presence...hey by the way I think he was observing her since she felt his touch n wanted to mak her and also himself REALIZE it...I'm sure his will help their bond to move in rite direction...
Loved the way she answered CHANDIS ...
First the best part and that was when Arnav came upto Khushi when she is sitting and missing him terribly communicating with her mom.
I was a little surprised that she ventured out of the Mahal .. when she has so many threats against her...but then i guess that chandi and gang had to come there to move the story.. but how did they come to know of Khushi being at the temple...
First i thought Shikar and chandi are delusional ,,, clearly shikars mom is also crazy... what crap she was talking,,,
Good Khushi gave them back royally!!
Plz next update my Arnav Ji should be there ok Hon !!!
wonderful dear super like i mean now she is recognizing her feelngs for him really liked it....hope dis time arnav has really come..."missing me raani saa" omg got goosebumps all over the body....he is irresistible..update it soon
doubt di...
khushi did feel arnav whn she was drying her hair..
n buaji is arnav's ally..
arnav did ask fr her help in convincing khushi, to which she told him she wud..
so was seh really hallucinating.. or was it arnav n buaji playing along to mk her miss him??
plus.. y wud hte every protective buaji send khushi alone??
she sure doesnt seem to b siding with chandi's, so did she already know tht arnav is bak home??
its 4am rt nw.. i was up fr tisya's milk, n this is wht i was thinking all along.. n so here is my doubt..
waiting fr next one di.. hoping it wud answer :)
That was not fair. I was like 'yipiiee, it's Arnav' and then the very next moment it's Buaji.
But it was a wonderful update with Khushi seeing and missing Arnav everywhere and then her talking back to Bairav and his family member. Also great when Khushi mentions Shikar as her brother.
And now is Arnav really back at a sudden, I'm somehow sceptical.
Amazing update !!! Khushi is missing her Raja Saa.. she is feeling him everywhere... and finally he is there with smirk asking her 'Missing me Rani Saa???' Arnav Arnav.. he is so sweet... He is knowing his wife is missing him and i think only to make her realise her love for him he is hiding himself from Khushi.. Loved Khushi's answer to chandi and his wife.. She is truly changing into Mrs ASR... loved the update..
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