Wednesday 10 July 2013

P-50

THE PURSUIT-50
THE MIRAGE-II


Pic Credit SS NAIR


I would like to dedicate this Part to my dearest SS NAIR who made most of the banners that gave a face to my FFs- THE MIRAGE, THE PURSUIT as well as VAISHALI !Thank You Chotey for breathing life into my characters and giving a visual form to my creations!!

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"Jiji hum dekh aathey hain kya hua! Nahi tho woh donon usey kuch kar na dein"Khushi said.
(Jiji I shall go see what these blokes are upto! I am afraid they might do something to that man out there)

Payal immediately caught her hand and said," Khushi woh jo bhi kar rahey haina, woh tumharey liye hain! Thu usmey math pad!"
( what ever they are up to is to keep you safe! You stay out of it)

"Bhook lag rahi hain aur chai mangwaakey kitni der ho gayi hain... uska tho bhi intezaam karthein hain" Khushi just wanted to slip away! 
( I am hungry and its been a long time that we ordered for some tea! Let me check atleast on that!)

"Accha! Hum dekhthey hain! Tum yahi ruko aur ek minute..." Payal called Sanju and said," Sanju thu thodi der yahaan Khushi key sath rahogi? Accha? Theek hain!" she cut the call!
( Ok! I shall check myself! You stay! Just a second...Sanju can you be here for a few minutes?... ok!)

"Megha aarahi hain! My jaakey kuch khaaney ka intezaam karthi hun!" (Meghaa is coming! I will go fix something to eat) As she was moving out of Laad Governor's, Megha stepped in saying," Payal di humey nahi patha tha yeh sab!( I was not aware of all this) Payal smile and patted her on her cheek and said," Khushi key sath rehna ok?"( Stay with Khushi ok?) And left!



11 comments:

tanmay said...

gd one di :)

fb gave an intimation :):)

pretty messed up.. i dont understand hw can everyone in the family knw.. n yet let her marry someone else.. putting everyone ie arnav, khushi, maan thru a complete mess.. n complication of hearts n feelings...

i still fail to see hw can khushi nt knw abt it.. anyways.. i m sure u wud explain.. in ur own way..

n i m really nt amused with payal knwing it n still nt letting arnav knw abt it earlier.. its clear cheating.. even if the pics were erased.. he has all the rt to knw..

well as per me..

dhakkan said...

congratulation didi and all the readers. The pursuit has completed half-centuryPartyIts party timeParty

OMG...What a perfect half century. The major twist of the story. Deepu and Khushi did marriage rituals even if for fun they did it. But kuch to choot raha hai. Khushi is unaware of Deepu's feelings, it is shown by her attitude inlast few chapters or is she faking it, though it is a rare possibility. What the!!!!!!

grrr confused


But one thing is right when Deepu said that he is already married. He was referring to this wedding.


And Payaliya knew all along.


Thrilling episode...


Congratulations once again. May you write many more such wonderful stories


Cheers
Anukriti

stories.1408 said...

total chaos.....even if khushi doesnt remember this how can payal allow her to get married to arnav.gosh...cant see arshi separate

Unknown said...

omg wat the hell is dat........
completely messed up....
waiting eager to know actually wat happened on dat day in mela and y else khushi does not know about it......or else it was just a prank........
omg full confused

Simi said...

I am confused...whom to believe...is Khushi innocent?...How come she got into this mess...If her marriage with Maan is real....then what about her relation with Arnav?Pls pls update soon...it's utter shocking...how come Payal assist them in this mess...donno why I am hating Maan...He can't save his wife...while his wife is knowingly/half knowingly/ knowingly messing up with another man...

Lakshmi said...

Anu!!! i think Disha earlier predicated abt marriage in earlier posts...but u really has given a shock yaar.... Marriage...Maan seems to be aware of it and Payal too....will wait for ur explaination in the coming chapters before jumping .....

Congrats for half century dear...All the best for all u do in future too....

Deepu - The Wireless Brain said...

Thanks Di... :)
Thank You So Much... :)
Itz My Pleasure Di.. :D
And Your Stories Are Just Outstanding... :)
I Love It! <3

Disha said...

What the Anu... dimaag ka dahi ho gaya !!

Khushi cant do something like this intentionally...has she lost her memory or something !!

Whats happening !!! :(

Disha said...

By d way y cant i view ur chat window?

GoldenHaze said...

Myne nikal diya hai Dishu! NAya lagaaney ke liye! Abhi kuch karthi hun...

jyothirockz said...

This is the most scandalous chapter ever...I never thought MAAN n khushi went thru full marriage n khushi dint even know ..... How was that possible ...
But Payal knowing not letting Arnav knowing.....why did hey not tell khushi when she was abt to get married .....too many questions to be answered....waiting....