Thursday, 22 August 2013

P-58/1

THE PURSUIT-58/1
THE MIRAGE-II

Pic Credit: SSNAIR

"Acch na apka na mera..."Khushi said..
( Neither yours nor mine... A neutral request)
"Bolo..." Arnav said.
"Aap Megha ji aur Maan ko milaaney ke liye humaari sahaaytha kariengey? Khushi asked hesitantly!
( Can you help me in getting Maan and Megha together?)

Arnav looked at his wife and a very wicked smile shone on his face..." Anything for you ma'am!" And silently he added very softly  " And anything to trouble that #$%^&&# Deepu!!!!"

"Chalo! Ab kholengey!" ( Ten I shall free you) Khushi stood before him and said,

"Aap ko bus Maan sey baath karni hain!"
( You just need to speak with Maan!)

"Wait a minute... is it not some silly plan of yours?" Arnav asked his spirits already dampened! He was counting on some idiotic plan of Khushi that would be a treat to him as it would infuriate the rat Deepu!

"Nahi! Bilkul nahi yeh tho bahut seedhi..." Khushi brushed Arnav's collar indicating the gravity of the issue... "aur pakki baath hogi!"

( Not at all! This would be straight and very sure thing!)

"Aur mujhey kya karna hoga?" Arnav enquired...


12 comments:

Sanju Pal said...

hiii dear...i tried to comment several times ...it was showing some error ...i guess others also faced the same problem...can comment after knowing the do baatein...

Sarita Saigal said...

Cliffhanger doc! A punishment for less comments. Aap asr ko jeetne detin hain har bar. Thats partiality.
I am visualizing the scene n u leave us here? Thats worst frustration than ASR'S.

GoldenHaze said...

@Sanju Pal! Thank you so much! I am sorry for the inconvenience as I am still not aware of the reason! However then you guys could always email me at thoughtsgallore@gmail.com or on my IF ID anukat!
Its just that it feels very sad when I see an empty comment box! Even a discussion on the story is welcome !I don't look forward to more than that believe me!

GoldenHaze said...

@ Sarita Saigal
Di Sabr ka phal jab ASR hotha hain tho bahut badhiya hotha hain!

Mythu said...

keep writing....... love reading ur story... :-)

Lakshmi said...

ASR always a deal maker...now what's he going to ask???

monakaran said...

I loved the update - love the banter between Arnav and Khushi...

Shubhanjli Saxena said...

Nice update...
I ve on e question... What happened after that confession. I was thinking we ll get some reaction from ASR and Khushi ll be so happy but nothing happened. Ve I missed something. Suddenly track changed and Man came in btw.

I loved the ques ans session of Khushi n Arnav. Loved it as always.

Disha said...

Loved this normal nok jhok wala update between hubby and wifey after a long time of some heavy duty updates ! :)

smart girl said...

awww...
such a sweet update dear...
lovd it..,.
plzzzz continue soon.....

Tessy Rani George said...

Hi,
Your story is wonderful. You are describing the nature of the charactors through their actions and talks. You are doing a wonderful job. Please update.

namendra shaz said...

Arnav is always this macho being dealing with love by protecting Khushi from danger by overriding her wishes. Here he is suddenly rendered helpless by a mere saree. Khushi's playfulness was refreshing!